I Just Want To Say
I just want to say you need don’t worry
It’s only new day and new story
Thank goodness I don’t realize the horrible danger
I suppose I become a ranger but who feels bad?
I just want to say you are great-looking
And know you have been reckoning
This stuff could spoil your plans
Funny! It’s time to pack up your bags
Our love is just for a season
There is no another reason
I just want to say have a nice trip
If I could kiss you in your lips
Oh, I understand I am not just born
But take your time the day is not gone
I just want to say keep on your courage
‘Cause an anxiety holds me hostage
There is no more battle as before
Everything is fair and now we are all for
Our love is just for a season
There is no another reason
I just want to say If you want to stay don’t hesitate
Perhaps next time to run away
But stupid philosophy of my life
Tries to give you a hint of goodbye
I just want to say it’s hard to forget
Memories which decided to stay in
You take your bags and come out
And no words flew from my mouth
There is nobody at the room with the exception of me
All events have been as through a sleep
There is nobody at the room with the exception of me
All events have been as through a sleep
Our love is just for a season
There is no another reason
Оценки:
Partizan - "5"Сергей (модератор) - "9"
Занятой Лирик - "6"
Клево. Тоже хотел бы уметь писать стихи на английском языке. Хотя, это не евровидение, где могут соревноваться песни на разных языках.
Машинально пытался срифмовать hesitate и away, стоило бы отделить «don’t hesitate» для удобства прочтения.
Я бы все таки поставил высокую оценку, но призового места не дал.
русскоязычный сайт, русскоязычные(большей частью) авторы…. откуда желание написать и запостить текст на инглише? я даже онлайн-переводчиком не стала себя утруждать, т.к. бред все и галиматья — и надо делать грамотный подстрочник….
Н-да. «Моя любовь лишь на сезон» Забавная песенка, жалко музыки нет. И посему только 5: 2+2+0+1=5
That`s fine! That`s fuuny! But I Think, this song should be in other competition.
«I just want to say you need don’t worry…»
Don`t worry! Be happy!
2+2+1+1=6 points.
Оценки не будет.